Structure of the storyline
- Open on the street with the characters coming out of the houses in the morning like every other day. Theo's character walks by and sits on a bench on the street.
- Roland's shop, Bonnie walks in and asks about her mother, Leighton finishes stocking and then Bonnie begins flirting with him. Whilst Leighton tries to get on with his work, Bonnie exits and Roland and Leighton begin to shut up shop. Just as the shop is finished closing Charlie enters and Roland tries to talk to him and work out what he's hiding. Charlie stays quiet and quickly leaves the shop. Roland shuts up and the lights fade into a blackout.
- When the lights fade in Bonnie and Leighton walk along to their café date and they have their scene in their café date.
- The plot then cuts to the scene in Bonnie's dad's room where she tries to make Leighton sleep with her and he comes out to her that he is gay. Horrified by this, Bonnie tells him to leave and her brother comes back early and hits her as he believes she has slept with a boy outside of marriage.
- Hurt and upset by what has just happened with Leighton and her brother Bonnie begins crying up against her bedroom wall. Charlie hears this and they begin talking through the walls about Bonnie's bad home life and Charlie's emotional structure and his girlfriend.
- Leighton comes back into work the next day and his behaviour spooks Roland, Leighton leaves early saying he's going to the doctors.
- Mark comes into the shop later that day and Roland asks Mark if he's examined Leighton, he then asks him to run a checkup on him. Mark's results come back and he fears that Leighton may be suffering from being gay and therefore may face the consequence of gross indecency and imprisonment unless he can book him in for chemical castration to cure him.
- Doctor's home appointment, interaction with Dr. Hanson and Roland. A check-upon Roland's health.
- Leighton takes over shop, uncomfortable encounter with Bonnie - she talks about new man.
- Outside house - Bonnie and Charlie.
- Dr. Hanson comes into shop, check up on Roland after a bad appointment. Roland's detearation starts.
- Busking - Charlie's past exposed
- Bonnie gets questioned by Leighton.
- Roland encounters with Bonnie - Bonnie changed
- Mark and Bonnie - doctor scene pregnancy
- Drunk encounter with Charlie and Bonnie
- Shop scene - Bonnie asks to speak to Leighton, shows Roland weak.
- Charlie's monologue
- Shutting shop - Bonnie and Leighton walk in after Mark tells them Roland's died, Mark walks away.
- Bonnie starts to see an older man after her date with Leighton goes wrong, brags about how he's a real man, however she gets pregnant and he starts to treat her badly.
- Fear of her parents finding out she's pregnant she proposes a marriage to Leighton to protect his homosexuality and her pregnancy.
- Charlie is a drinker due to the loss of his wife.
- It is discovered that Leighton is gay by __ and he begins fearing that the events in London will repeat themselves.
- Roland dies from his dementia, his shop is shut and he doesn't answer the door when Mark comes for his home visit.
- Roland's shop, Bonnie walks in and asks about her mother, Leighton finishes stocking and then Bonnie begins flirting with him. Whilst Leighton tries to get on with his work, Bonnie exits and Roland and Leighton begin to shut up shop. Just as the shop is finished closing Charlie enters and Roland tries to talk to him and work out what he's hiding. Charlie stays quiet and quickly leaves the shop. Roland shuts up and the lights fade into a blackout.
- When the lights fade in Bonnie and Leighton walk along to their café date and they have their scene in their café date.
- The plot then cuts to the scene in Bonnie's dad's room where she tries to make Leighton sleep with her and he comes out to her that he is gay. Horrified by this, Bonnie tells him to leave and her brother comes back early and hits her as he believes she has slept with a boy outside of marriage.
- Hurt and upset by what has just happened with Leighton and her brother Bonnie begins crying up against her bedroom wall. Charlie hears this and they begin talking through the walls about Bonnie's bad home life and Charlie's emotional structure and his girlfriend.
- Leighton comes back into work the next day and his behaviour spooks Roland, Leighton leaves early saying he's going to the doctors.
- Mark comes into the shop later that day and Roland asks Mark if he's examined Leighton, he then asks him to run a checkup on him. Mark's results come back and he fears that Leighton may be suffering from being gay and therefore may face the consequence of gross indecency and imprisonment unless he can book him in for chemical castration to cure him.
- Doctor's home appointment, interaction with Dr. Hanson and Roland. A check-upon Roland's health.
- Leighton takes over shop, uncomfortable encounter with Bonnie - she talks about new man.
- Outside house - Bonnie and Charlie.
- Dr. Hanson comes into shop, check up on Roland after a bad appointment. Roland's detearation starts.
- Busking - Charlie's past exposed
- Bonnie gets questioned by Leighton.
- Roland encounters with Bonnie - Bonnie changed
- Mark and Bonnie - doctor scene pregnancy
- Drunk encounter with Charlie and Bonnie
- Shop scene - Bonnie asks to speak to Leighton, shows Roland weak.
- Charlie's monologue
- Shutting shop - Bonnie and Leighton walk in after Mark tells them Roland's died, Mark walks away.
NEW IDEAS
- Mark has a good relationship with Roland due to his dementia and old age.- Bonnie starts to see an older man after her date with Leighton goes wrong, brags about how he's a real man, however she gets pregnant and he starts to treat her badly.
- Fear of her parents finding out she's pregnant she proposes a marriage to Leighton to protect his homosexuality and her pregnancy.
- Charlie is a drinker due to the loss of his wife.
- It is discovered that Leighton is gay by __ and he begins fearing that the events in London will repeat themselves.
- Roland dies from his dementia, his shop is shut and he doesn't answer the door when Mark comes for his home visit.
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